{"id":1229,"date":"2026-11-02T00:22:00","date_gmt":"2026-11-01T21:22:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sechenov.id\/?p=1229"},"modified":"2026-11-02T00:22:00","modified_gmt":"2026-11-01T21:22:00","slug":"revising-a-research-summary-after-academic-feedback","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sechenov.id\/en\/revising-a-research-summary-after-academic-feedback\/","title":{"rendered":"Revising a Research Summary after Academic Feedback"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"leaders-material\" lang=\"en\">\n<p>Receiving feedback on a summary is most useful when you can connect each comment with a revision. \u201cMake it clearer\u201d may concern the sequence, an undefined term or a claim that extends beyond the source. Identifying the issue helps you choose the right change.<\/p>\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/sechenov.id\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/09\/sechenov-landing-59a11f421f2b4c.jpeg\" alt=\"Sechenov University illustration accompanying an article on revising a research summary after academic feedback\"\/><\/figure>\n<p>Sechenov University&#8217;s Leaders in Health Innovations programme includes research development and scientific communication. Applicants in Indonesia can practise revision with suitable educational material before enrolment.<\/p>\n<h2>Understand the comment before rewriting<\/h2>\n<p>Read the feedback and identify the passage it concerns. If the meaning is unclear, ask a focused question. Do not replace an entire paragraph before knowing whether the issue is accuracy, organisation or wording.<\/p>\n<p>Return to the source when a claim is questioned. The goal is to represent it faithfully, not to defend the first version of your summary.<\/p>\n<h2>Revise the reasoning as well as the sentence<\/h2>\n<p>A confusing passage may need an intermediate explanation rather than shorter words. Ask which connection a reader must understand and provide it. If the source does not support the conclusion, narrow the conclusion instead of making it sound more authoritative.<\/p>\n<p>Read the <a href=\"https:\/\/sechenov.id\/en\/leaders-in-health-innovations\/\">programme overview<\/a> to understand the place of research within its medical and leadership education. This personal exercise is not an official admissions assignment or a substitute for supervised research.<\/p>\n<h2>Record what the revision taught you<\/h2>\n<p>Keep a short note of the change and why it helped. You may notice a habit of introducing terms too late or treating an inference as a reported result. Use that observation when drafting the next summary.<\/p>\n<p>Check the <a href=\"https:\/\/sechenov.id\/en\/admissions\/\">application guidance<\/a> for current procedures and the <a href=\"https:\/\/sechenov.id\/en\/contacts\/\">contact section<\/a> for course enquiries. Official details are available at https:\/\/healthleaders.sechenov.ru\/ and healthleaders@staff.sechenov.ru.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Use feedback to improve the accuracy, structure and scope of a research-learning summary without changing claims merely to sound more confident.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":1054,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1229","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-bez-kategorii"],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v26.5 - https:\/\/yoast.com\/wordpress\/plugins\/seo\/ -->\n<title>Revising a Research Summary after Academic Feedback - Sechenov University Indonesia<\/title>\n<meta name=\"robots\" content=\"index, follow, max-snippet:-1, max-image-preview:large, max-video-preview:-1\" \/>\n<link rel=\"canonical\" href=\"https:\/\/sechenov.id\/en\/revising-a-research-summary-after-academic-feedback\/\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:locale\" content=\"en_US\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:type\" content=\"article\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:title\" content=\"Revising a Research Summary after Academic Feedback - 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